in pursuit of one's dream(let's start again)
staring poverty in the eye
(keep this for later)
this culture of greed
(not publishable in the current climate)
once upon a time
(good)
in a far off land
(a sense of location is always helpful)
there lived a professional poker player
(can everyone identify with this?)
there lived a girl
(good)
(very good)
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